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A Tear Falls
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:55:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I sit and sigh
i ride i fly
a tear falls
as i start to cry,
illuminating
the darkness
is a moon so bright
as i wonder
what should i do with my life.
Only feelings of doom
in this empty room
so hollow
don't know
what to do,
everytime that i
let someone inside
they cut me deep
i bleed
i die.
Illuminated by the moon
is this empty space
where there is so much illusion
words could never explain
the confused feelings
i have deep inside
a tear falls
as i start to cry.
Copyright ©
secretwind
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2003-12-23 06:55:37]
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:59:44 AM AEST
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Very sad poem indeed, but well written all the same. Great title, too.
Truly,
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 07:35:44 AM AEST
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| words could never explain.......we try though don' t we??? sad write...... |
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by 13Hopes on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:14:17 AM AEST
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This poem is sad and touching, its true, words may never explain fully what we try and say..
Cheers
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:23:13 PM AEST
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I found your poem incredibly sad. I am fighting tears myself. The poem was great, well written and deeply touching.
Kie |
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:53:23 AM AEST
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this was heartbreaking...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 08:20:45 AM AEST
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Such a heartfelt poem
Brilliant
Super words
Awe some
Well written
So sad to
Well done
Love Angelxxxxxxx |
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Re: A Tear Falls
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 12:05:11 AM AEST
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| I can certainly can relate to this one.<br />
Sad but good work here.<br />
You almost got a tear or two with this write.<br />
luv, huggs,<br />
emy |
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