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Amaranthine
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:32:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Of alpha and omega
Of beginning and doom
The wilted flower once
Bore a fadeless bloom
No force can be everlasting
The fragility of time will not allow
No cycle can remain unbroken
Continuity must be disendowed
Nothing lasts forever
How dissolves the strongest metal
For every rebirth of the flower
The bloom yields one less petal
As many eons pass
Sheets of ice will cover this plane
When it melts away and all is gone
Reborn is the lotus with the first rain
Life is a gradual spiral
Slowly decreasing in length
What's delicate is enduring
Nothing's more fleeting than strength
Throughout alpha and omega
'Midst faint and crumbling power
Before beginning and after doom
There stands only the flower
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Re: Amaranthine
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:40:16 AM AEST
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| mmmm that's really beautiful..... |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:45:54 AM AEST
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| very meaningful..every stanza is well written with a new out look. venkat |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:57:35 AM AEST
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Very good!
peace, joy, luv, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:20:48 PM AEST
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And your lone flower stands and smiles at you for the life you gave it with your view...and this lovely poetry true.
Spellbinding VS...I was memerized by this write....the Cycle of Life...is unending...and so is Love.
ConSue
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Eve on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 01:34:41 PM AEST
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...-You- quit? I throw down my paper and various writing utensils and slam the door on my way out, then. This is enough to make Poe himself rise out of his grave and worship this, because I'm afraid this write might have outdone even some of his.
And that says an awful lot.
Keep writing or -die-,
-Eve. |
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Re: Amaranthine
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:14:52 AM AEST
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This i like. a top-10 write for sure, i'm not sure if its in the top five of yours . . .
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