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bed linen for tissues (remembering us)
Contributed by
infedelity_hurts
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:44:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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of course i can't sleep
my sheets are drenched
smelling of the beach
minus the sun and sand
i cry these nights
thinking of us
i can remember a time
when we would ride phone lines
and your sweet voice would fill my head
with sweet sonnets of satisfaction
and my heart raced
with every precious word
but now i'm simply left with dial tones
and static memories of your presence
it started so perfect
its downfall was calculated
measurede and carried out
with heartbreaking brilliance
but there were signs
phone calls cut short
three little words
were going unreturned
but i am illiterate to these
blinded by infatuation
you were the one for me
my ounterpart, my completion
my glass was half full
you filled it to the brim
now sapped it, still draining
"this isn't working" are the words of my dehydration
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Re: bed linen for tissues (remembering us)
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:42:38 AM AEST
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aLL THREE OF THE POST ARE REALLY WRITTEN WELL FROM THE DEEPTH of your soul.
Sad but great work!
peace, joy, luv, better times, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: bed linen for tissues (remembering us)
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:23:27 AM AEST
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| i like this......... |
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Re: bed linen for tissues (remembering us)
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by SpreadYourWings on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:59:01 PM AEST
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| I absolutely loved this poem. The feelings you created reminded me a bit of my emo music lol. Keep Writing! |
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