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Kisses so Sweet
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:09:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sweet kisses
on November mornings
turn to sour bites
every night
Love holding on
trying to stay strong
wilting with the wintery winds
I hate Good byes but
my heart will mend!
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-12-23 02:09:38]
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Re: Kisses so Sweet
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:35:41 AM AEST
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| the kisses seem to be wilting with wintry winds..good write. venkat |
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Re: Kisses so Sweet
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:33:19 PM AEST
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'Sweet kisses
on November mornings
turn to sour bites
every night'
I really liked these lines Jenna. |
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Re: Kisses so Sweet
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by springfield on
Monday, 29th December 2003 @ 11:33:06 PM AEST
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| Nice poem. You're right, time does mend, and it will make you a stronger person. But it su**ks that we have to go through that, doesn't it? |
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