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Lost in Twilight
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:05:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Lost in the twilight
twring and swirling
bright stars ahead
is all I can see
Glittery shadows
dancing around me
Whirling and twirling
in the twilight I'm lost
JENNA
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PhantomVampyress
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2003-12-23 02:05:46] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Lost in Twilight
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 05:18:45 AM AEST (User
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all i can do is nod and smile....... |
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Re: Lost in Twilight
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 01:30:53 PM AEST (User
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What book was that Jenna? I think I can follow this for the most part. Wish you would have made it a little longer though. I really liked it none the less though... I guess like ecstasy never long enough. Hehe. Sorry. |
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Re: Lost in Twilight
(User Rating: 1 ) by myheartsvoice on
Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 09:14:41 AM AEST (User
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First of all i love the tittle.The peice it's self is magical. Another gem you've managed
to win the heart and soul along with capturing the readers imagination with. Splendid writting.
Ben |
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