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Sickness

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 01:10:29 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



This sickness overflows my body
each waking moment without you
I cannot control it anymore
I want to get away
My weakness is showing
so be it
I cant control it anymore
You'll say our time will come
to be together forever
...but I cant help worry
things change
I dont want to control it anymore
What about the "What ifs"?
Why cant this be easier?
instead of increasingly more difficult
each day, week, hour
I wont control it anymore
It breaks me down to hide
unknown pain
Taking all my strength and
letting it show..
I do not mean to worry you
I dont control it anymore
If only I knew what to say
what causes it..
Only you make me happy
without you..I'm tortured
constantly hurting
constantly wondering
worrying..
this sickness now controls me.




Copyright © PsychoticDreamz ... [ 2003-12-23 01:10:29]
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Re: Sickness (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:11:35 AM AEST
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This is a sad but beautiful write.. I can understand these feelings here.. sometimes we need the one person who don't feel the same or they hurt us ... this is an awesome write

peace joy and hope
JENNA


Re: Sickness (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:50:53 AM AEST
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Hey, I like this
constantly hurting
constantly wondering
worrying..
You say the sickness controls you, but thats a choice u can control it and master it as well you are strong and u can fight it.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Sickness (User Rating: 1 )
by depresseddiva on Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 10:16:46 AM AEST
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your really good at this stuff i just dont think ive got the hang of it and but anyways talk to ya later if your online




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