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Lost Among The Pain
Contributed by
PsychoticDreamz
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:50:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Lost in the blackness surrounding my soul
Lost in the forestry or returning pain
Still I wander for my safe way out
Frozen in time, I call your name
You do not hear my silent shouts
You do not see my crimson tears
I'm blinded by reality, my mind creates it's own
Fooling me, my senses repeatedly numbed
Hearing my mind's harpsicord playing
Looking to see its not been strung
What am I suppose to turn to
when overcome by all of my fears?
The first light of the day, breaks
The fog begins to rise
To look across this vacant field
..watch you turn away from my eyes
Why did you leave me here to suffer
when you've always been so near?
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PsychoticDreamz
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2003-12-23 00:50:55]
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Re: Lost Among The Pain
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by CuttersAngel on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:52:39 AM AEST
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| Great poem. I love the descriptive words you chose to use. |
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Re: Lost Among The Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:46:16 PM AEST
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this was beautiful yet terribly sad. I liked how u compared depression to sad music instead of water like I always do. Once again a beautiful poem I loved it all.
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