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Burning with flames of passion..
Contributed by
venkat
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Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:34:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am hit by the arrows of Cupid
As you move very near, my mind
Surfs on the swells of your breasts
And skips on the sway of your hips
How can I remain as a log of wood?
On seeing your moon like lusty face
I have fallen on your lofty breasts
Why do you feel uneasiness? In vain
I’m not embarrassed by your glances
Even the sun who is immovable and
Oppressor of gloom falls down or sets
For one who has risen high tumbles
Sooner or later due to his loneliness
Hence dear, don’t waste our life time!
Lucky is the man who enjoys his life
Won’t you grant me the bliss of love?
The bliss which arises from the curves
Of your breasts pressed during light
Embraces; bliss that arises in a kiss
From nibbling of your nectarine lips
The bliss manifested by the utterance
Of hissing sounds and frowning looks
Bliss shown by the dancing of hands
And the murmuring of sweet love words
Lucky if I will be wearied by the exertion
Caused by the love sport and rest within
The confines of your arms having placed
My chest on your breasts wet with sweat!
23-12-2003
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2003-12-23 00:34:06]
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by Ilhar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:40:21 AM AEST
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well written
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by LOWMAN613 on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 01:01:17 AM AEST
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Wow this was steamy!
A very well done write! Christina |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 01:10:56 AM AEST
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Oh my Venkat this is superb!! So sensual and loving moving piece of work here my friend.
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 02:13:19 AM AEST
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wow awesome write and beautifully written you can feel the passion and love in this
peace joy and hope
JENNA |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by chandramohan on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:13:04 AM AEST
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It is picturusque and emotional...
very good presentation my friend.
well done.
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:40:16 AM AEST
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| I certainly hope she hears your call .. and notices your passion burning for her ... wishing you both a Merry Christmas ... Jan |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:21:48 AM AEST
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Very steaming write!
Great one!
peace, joy, luv, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:42:27 PM AEST
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| great write, hope you show this to her, take care Val |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 06:10:16 AM AEST
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| How sensuous and romantic you are...a beautiful steamy one. |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by Menelaus on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:49:39 AM AEST
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| Kudos to venkat. I was going to write something-but it seems eveyone beat me to it. Oh well. Carry on, friend! |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by Cobalt on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 12:46:39 PM AEST
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| Good lord venkat. I love how you describe most things. Very heavenly how you do. I still say your poems should be kept away from small children hehe. I love em though they are truly awesome. I even like the title. |
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by karoody on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 05:39:08 AM AEST
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dearest friend, this is sensual, sweet, beautiful...great write
kara
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Re: Burning with flames of passion..
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 02:36:54 AM AEST
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Ah, this makes your mind burn with passionate desire. Beautiful, my friend, very sensually beautiful.
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