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can you even see me?

Contributed by frozensuicide on Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:10:44 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Can any one hear me?
Does anyone even listen.
Can you even see?
The pain within me.

Or do I not even want you to worry?
About the suffering I am condemned with?
Maybe I don’t want you to go into a fit of furry,
Or I just don’t want your eyes to be blurry.

Can you even hear me?
Does anyone even listen.
Can you even see me?
Can you even see that I am not happy?

I just do not know what to do anymore,
I just don’t know what to say.
I don’t want to bother you anymore,
I don’t know what I'm meant for.

I shut everyone out,
Pretend its all okay.
I don’t want to pout,
I don’t know what life is about.

Anymore.
Anymore.
Anymore.
Anymore.

Can you even hear me?
Does anyone even listen.
Can you even see me?
Can you even see that I am not happy?

You see me when I push away.
You hear me when I scream.
But do you ever see me any other day?
When I am not sad or just having nothing to say?

Do you see me when I try to see you,
Or do you just not bother to notice.
Until I cry out to you,
Just so I can talk to you.

You only bother to listen for that time,
You only bother to listen to ‘be there’
But do you really think it will make everything fine?
Make your life and mine?

Would you call it ‘whining?’
If I told you that I wanted to kill myself.
If I told you I was dying,
That I was talking to you crying.

Only for that time.
You would see.
Only then would your ears be mine.
Only then, would you try to find?

A way to see.
A way to hear.
A way to be.
To able to actually see me.

Copyright Â© frozensuicide ... [ 2003-12-22 23:10:44]
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Re: can you even see me? (User Rating: 1 )
by Fudge on Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:04:30 AM AEST
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i am sad that you feel this way. i can't say i understand, but i can tell you that you are not alone in this....someone used to be this way to me, never listen to me, never wanted to hear my problems. i just thought 'you are not worth my anger, i'll confide in someone who does care'. maybe it might work for you? i hope you're okay.

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