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Road to nowhere
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:06:23 PM in AEST
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I glide amongst relam of time
Seraching for something so long ago
I breathe the words of endless love
And listen to the sounds of broken souls
Shadows grace my life of darkness
Growing like shade upon a wall
Speaking in a tone of screaming silence
I call out for the peace within us all
Falling through a vortex of passion
A statue of my emotions so bare
Memories guide my heart through hell
And leave me at the road to nowhere
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2003-12-22 23:06:23]
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Re: Road to nowhere
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by harshreality on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:24:47 PM AEST
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This was absolutely beautiful. It brought tears to my eyes. It seems my memories have also left me at the road to nowhere, but I'm just not willing to settle for that, So I'll never allow myself to give up hope. Who knows..... maybe I'll find a path that I'm temporarily unable to see leading straight from the road to nowhere into eternal happiness ( or atleast contentment). Maybe you will to.
Always hope and believe in your dreams;
It helps you to cope with the trivial things....... Harshreality |
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Re: Road to nowhere
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by Rawjer on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:23:30 AM AEST
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| ya know most poetry i dont like cause its too chipper and fake...but not yours or at least this one.. i like your style and hope to see future reads from you. Rawj |
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Re: Road to nowhere
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by jme on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 09:13:10 AM AEST
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| Great poem. |
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Re: Road to nowhere
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by CuttersAngel on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 01:11:58 PM AEST
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| You did a good job |
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Re: Road to nowhere
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 28th December 2003 @ 09:09:10 AM AEST
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| Awesome write. |
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Re: Road to nowhere
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by Ilhar on
Friday, 2nd January 2004 @ 03:41:54 PM AEST
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well done takes the reader w/ you on the road
shari |
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Re: Road to nowhere
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:37:33 PM AEST
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Very well done...I'm crying as I read this..It is so wonderful...
Jamie |
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