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Death by dating
Contributed by
Bohemian_with_a_pen
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Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:50:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Lisa was crazy about a boy
His presence gave her eternal joy
But to him she wasnt good enough
So she stopped crying and acted tough
One day she finally asked him out
"Go and die!" was all he would shout
She killed herself that lonesome night
Heart broken in her one last fight
He really liked her, it just want cool
To date such a pretty young fool
And now this talented girl is dead
Went off and died, just like he said
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Re: Death by dating
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by CuttersAngel on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:56:05 AM AEST
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| WOW!! It's nice to know that someone else can see the hidden, dark truth of dating. Fantastic work. |
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Re: Death by dating
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by Wrybod on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 03:42:24 AM AEST
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Life is like the ocean
as a child you play on the beach
go for a paddle
as an adolescent you face the breakers
then the huge humping swells
As an adult you reach the rolling open sea
You can predict, make judgements, face storms.
Not everybody makes it
not every body wants to
bob
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Re: Death by dating
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 20th May 2004 @ 03:48:58 AM AEST
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| its a shame these things happen. i think theres a lesson to be learnt in this! think about what you say! |
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Re: Death by dating
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by EternalNight4x on
Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 04:24:16 PM AEST
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| powerful write, relationships can be tough and soemtiems turn out for the worse...i agree its a shame these things happen, wel great write keep posting |
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Re: Death by dating
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 30th November 2005 @ 01:23:14 AM AEST
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| your words are as powerful as the words of that boy, but urs work miracles, his work evil |
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