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4AM
Contributed by
Avery
on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:40:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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It's 4am and i still can't sleep
afraid to close my eyes
as in through my dreams you crawl and creep
sneaking back into my life
the pain you caused
lies deep within
hurt, lies and heartbreak
you still seem to bring
i can never forgive you
or forget what you have done
but i refuse to be beaten
because i can be strong
you had it easy
your life has now gone on
but the life you left me
still has to suffer on
so i lay down to sleep
try not to think of what you've done
or the innocence you stole from me
when i was still so young...
Copyright ©
Avery
... [
2002-08-30 06:40:03]
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Re: 4AM
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by Lia on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:41:30 AM AEST
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| Without forgiveness there is no forgetting...a hard lesson but is better to learn now then later... |
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Re: 4AM
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 06:57:48 AM AEST
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| This is a good write! I know a friend who is struggling with this right now. Hope this helped you to get some of it out of you |
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Re: 4AM
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by LJ on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 07:08:30 AM AEST
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| Great write. I really do like your work. It is from the heart! |
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Re: 4AM
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by Chrissie on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 09:11:13 AM AEST
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Keep writing Avery ...I truly believe it can help.
This is another poignant and heartfelt poem.
Chrissie x
It's nice to see you here on the new site . |
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Re: 4AM
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by MnMnMsrcool on
Friday, 30th August 2002 @ 09:20:02 AM AEST
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| this is a very good poem. very well said keep writing |
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