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A Hand Away
Contributed by
TamTam
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Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 04:58:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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My heart weeps like a willow tree.
Having something i cant have.
Loving someone i cant love.
I cry out in anger and sorrow.
It is not the rain,
Just the tears from those that are forgotten.
Living a life of drama and isolation.
Things will change they say,
But how could you be so sure.
Time is of our own.
We do what we want with it,
Whether it is used wisely,
Or taken advantage of.
We live our own lives,
And do our own things.
The world,
My world,
Seems to be coming to an end.
But everything happens for a reason.
Copyright ©
TamTam
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2003-12-22 16:58:54]
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Re: A Hand Away
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by jme on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 05:31:42 PM AEST
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| You've summed up so much of life in a few words. Great. |
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Re: A Hand Away
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by secretwind on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:21:18 PM AEST
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| short and to the point well done |
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Re: A Hand Away
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 12:23:36 AM AEST
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"My heart weeps like a willow tree" - I just love the comparison, as I have a thing for willows. Just had to say that. I also love the last line as well, since I live by that very saying. Great write!
~ Moonlit |
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