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Not here
Contributed by
Audirocker
on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 03:25:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why is no one here now
Why is everyone gone
Why does no one care
Why do people stare
Why am i here
Why do you fear
Death so near
Life so far
I am
Not here
Copyright ©
Audirocker
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2003-12-22 15:25:47]
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Re: Not here
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by Jackee_line on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 03:57:58 PM AEST
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I love this, How ingenious, to start with a long phrase and finish with almost nothing.Disappearing into nothingness.
Brilliant!!!!! One of my favorites. |
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Re: Not here
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:45:54 PM AEST
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I totally agree with the other comment. Well done, and very enjoyable to read...
Kie |
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Re: Not here
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by chiggerhead on
Sunday, 11th January 2004 @ 03:24:55 PM AEST
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| i really like how it reads. good job :) |
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