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Zeal
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 02:26:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Magic once reigned
in this place.
Magic once reflected
upon her face.
Chronos remembers that
once she invaded his space.
Slipping between them
worlds fell.
Bow to the queen
of the magical realm.
Summons forth the damned
and tormented.
Unravel that which
has been done.
Hasten forth
almighty blows.
This once was a
magical place
before it fell.
Tit for tat
and this for that
try to die
and fail to live.
Tie the noose all
too tight and fall
towards the light.
Lavos comes after
you tonight.
Lavos comes for you
take flight.
The destroyer,
the world walker,
will get you by night.
The book of the damned spirit
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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Re: Zeal
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 02:34:41 PM AEST
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Wow ( locks doors and windows). That was great Jeff. I wont sleep a wink tonight, lol, but that was GREAT!!
Well done!
Larry
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Re: Zeal
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by secretwind on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 02:59:51 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE,I LIKE THIS ONE. |
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Re: Zeal
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by Putteragain on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 03:15:17 PM AEST
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well you have done it again i musat say i love your work it stirs this hidden place within my soul
thanks
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Re: Zeal
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 06:16:55 PM AEST
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wow....not only are the doors locked but i'm under the covers quaking........praying for dawn.....
awesome write..........LOTR feel to it almost..... |
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Re: Zeal
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 07:07:31 PM AEST
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I don' t like the word 'zeal', but I liked this poem very good indeed and had stort of a mysterious tone to it. Keep up the writing.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Zeal
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 08:38:36 PM AEST
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always said you had untapped talent..this is the edge of it hun...roll on and fly high with it.
Truly chilling write..stench of death,decaying security..awesome!!! |
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Re: Zeal
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:50:41 PM AEST
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After reading this like 5 times I seem to be looking behind me constantly and am hearing random noises.....!
I think its safe to say I LOVED this poem.....
Kie |
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Re: Zeal
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:59:20 AM AEST
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| I love the title .... and the words of mystery ... very intriguing write ... Jan |
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Re: Zeal
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:57:16 PM AEST
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| I agree with Jaeann... definately a Lord of The Rings medieval feel here.... good stuff. |
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Re: Zeal
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by MoonlitAngel on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 05:16:56 AM AEST
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Well... it didn't scare me or make me paranoid, lol, but I really like the feel of it. It's all... arthurian and medieval. Love it!
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Zeal
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by chandramohan on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 06:49:29 AM AEST
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| well done friend... |
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Re: Zeal
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by karoody on
Thursday, 8th January 2004 @ 03:01:01 PM AEST
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| interesting write...very eerie and sullen at the same time...thanx for sharing... |
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Re: Zeal
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by Sheveg on
Saturday, 9th October 2010 @ 05:27:33 PM AEST
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Very intense.
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