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Transition
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 06:16:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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It seemed so solid
My tears they flow as liquid
It went up in smoke
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Vitreous_Soul
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2003-12-22 06:16:29]
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Re: Transition
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 06:31:26 AM AEST
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Dear VS
That's a great Haiku for sure.
I could read between the lines at the first glance....no one could miss their chance
to understand what your heart is saying!
Great one!
lovingcrtters
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Re: Transition
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by poetrygodslove on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 07:23:50 AM AEST
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| VERY GOOD MY FRIEND...SANDY |
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Re: Transition
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 10:00:48 AM AEST
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There were so many things to find between the lines of your poem. You did a fantastic job on this one.
Kie |
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Re: Transition
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 06:06:11 PM AEST
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| oh wow......this spoke volumes........... |
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