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THE HAUNTING
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 02:58:18 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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TEARS IN THE DARKNESS
UNDER
A SILVERY MOON
FALL SO
SWEETLY
AS I REMEMBER MOMENTS OF YOU,
DEEP IN LOVE
AND
FULL OF FUN
TALKING INTO THE NIGHT
FREELY
UNTIL THE MORNING SUN,
ENCOUNTERS OF PASSION
SWIRL AND FASCINATE
AS I FALL ASLEEP
AND
YOUR GHOST
SLOWLY FADES.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2003-12-22 02:58:18]
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Re: THE HAUNTING
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 03:21:42 AM AEST
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| touches beautifully ..it is a captivating write..venkat |
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Re: THE HAUNTING
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by Kie on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:50:48 AM AEST
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I truly love the way your words blend and flow.
Kie |
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Re: THE HAUNTING
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:04:15 AM AEST
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| Sublime poetry ... a small word of advice ... perhaps lower caps would be easier on the eye ... but these are beautiful words ... Jan |
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Re: THE HAUNTING
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by emystar on
Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 08:25:23 PM AEST
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I certainly know these feelings.
Very good write once again.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: THE HAUNTING
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by Cynthia on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 09:26:36 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful piece of poetry this is. I loved it. *S* Cynthia |
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