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Contributed by Suz on Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 09:55:21 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Aw, man;
I hate it when you do that...
It`s not fair
Don`t stare at me with your rusty eyes...
You can`t guilt me into it, you know...
Aw come on, stop it!
Stop...
stop shining at me like that...
Don`t beg,
no blood tonight.

Aw, man
(Haha)
Cut it out, I don`t want to play tonight.
Don`t look so sad stop it!

Okay, okay fine.
So you shut up
and stop looking at me with your metallic eyes
(Haha)
so tempting

Ohh, come here... come on, sweetie.
I can`t believe I ever tried to say no...
Yes, that feels nice.
(So nice)
Look at that blood, friend
(Perfect)

Let`s see how neat we can be
Straight, straighter.
slash after slash
Yes that feels so nice
(Yes, yes)
Deeper, friend, deeper.
Fetch! Fetch me that vein
Yeah, that's it
(Good boy)
Hey, that feels so nice!

Use the dull edge now, hun
use the dull edge

NOW STOP BOTHERING ME
it`s okay, hun, i`m kidding

I love it when you cut me.
(Oh yes)

Copyright © Suz ... [ 2003-12-21 21:55:21]
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Re: (Haha) (User Rating: 1 )
by whisper-of-night on Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 07:55:58 PM AEST
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This is the most brilliant yet freeky poem I had ever come across!!! When I read it, it would almost break my heart, but still I can't help to read it again, and again..... Don't know why...... I just hope it is not real........

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