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GOODBYE
Contributed by
springfield
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Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 04:52:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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What do you want of me that you got to have
What do I have that you want so bad
Take a good long look around
I'm not the only girl in town
Why do you worship me
Take a step back and tell me what you see
I'm just another girl, just human
You can go on without your life in ruin
I know you love me
I know you care
I know you do anything for me
And I find that pleasantly rare
You have to move on
You have to go your way
We tear each other apart
And with our heart we pay
We pay dearly
For the love we shattered
Now I'm scrapping to find myself
And what really matters
I have to go on without you , you see
You can't keep loving me so desperately
You have a life to live, just try
Go on, go on, goodbye.
Copyright ©
springfield
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2003-12-21 16:52:00]
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Re: GOODBYE
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 05:20:12 PM AEST
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| This was a very good write. You must understand though things are not always simple even something that should be like walking away. Just don't make the mistake of pushing someone out of your life that you don't want out. |
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Re: GOODBYE
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 02:16:54 AM AEST
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This makes me curious as to the story behind it. At first it just seemed like the hottest girl in town had another lowly admirer she wished would go away.. then it became clear that there was some sort of history between the two, something deep and effectual... if that's the right word. But anyways, yeah, left me wondering... great write!
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Re: GOODBYE
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:10:28 AM AEST
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ouch!! good write, sounds like some b.s. i'm dealin with now. glad you enjoyed my "friends or enemies". take care and keep writin.
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