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He Called Me Perfect
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 01:29:07 PM in AEST
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Blue Topaz eyes beam so bright
Sparkling beautifully in the light
Lips so sweet a gorgeous smile
A voice so soft yet heard from a mile
Vivid hair unique and bold
Autumn oak, fire and gold
Perched perfectly sits the sweetest nose
The cutest end to a stunning pose
A physical work of art maybe
yet this is not most important you see
For beyond the cover you will find
The Most Amazing Soul and Mind.....
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
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2003-12-21 13:29:07]
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Re: He Called Me Perfect
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by Chanti on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 02:26:00 PM AEST
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| Beautiful write! I love the way you put words together |
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Re: He Called Me Perfect
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 04:51:42 PM AEST
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| Beautifully worded, glad you shared this, Val |
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Re: He Called Me Perfect
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by MoonlitAngel on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 01:59:23 AM AEST
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Stunning! The description is great, but the end is perfect. A masterpiece in its own right. I particularly like the line about the nose. :P
~ Moonlit |
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Re: He Called Me Perfect
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by alecfernadez on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 03:27:02 PM AEST
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such a talented write
Brilliant
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