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DANCE MY SISTER
Contributed by
sweetangeluk
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Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 08:39:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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She wants to dance so leave her be
Just let her be herself let her be free
You suffocate all her hopes and dreams
Rip her heart apart rip it at the seams
You manipulate her tell her its love you feel
Control her mind exhaust her till she kneels
The family don't want to call when your there
As a catholic do you say the lords prayer
Just excuse yourself things will be fine till next time
Playing at happy families false smiles it is a crime
I can see right through you and your twisted mind
Do you think what you do is a victimless crime
They say forgive and forget what's happened in the past
To me you don't exist to our family your an outcast
My sister knows the difference between love and pain
What you do the way you act is totally inhumane
How can my sister look at you with love in her eyes
How many more times will she go through goodbyes
When we are together I can see your face change
It is love, happiness she feels to you that is strange
No phone calls no texts she doesn't want me to know
You want her to keep it a secret wont phone to say hello
As kids we played hide and seek why now does she hide
Dear sister you know you can trust, in me confide
Just want to say I love you, you are my kid sister
I want you to feel true happiness not hurt with blisters
Breaks my heart to see you hurt with his hand and lies
One day kind sister I pray its him you truly despise
Love Angelxxxx
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sweetangeluk
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2003-12-21 08:39:33]
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Re: DANCE MY SISTER
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 09:27:28 AM AEST
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Good 4 u telling it like it is.
Hopefully things will change after she reads this.
You've captured the subject remarkably well.
It's sad but hang tuff cause she will eventually get enuff.
I know what that feels like and then hating your ownself for compermizing who u r.
It's nuthing fair about what he does to her so keep the faith and pray for God 2 open her eyes.
Jus keep supporting her.
peace, joy, luv, prayers, happy holidys,
emy
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Re: DANCE MY SISTER
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by Cobalt on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 10:30:57 AM AEST
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| Wow. This was incredibly well done... I hope you are able to help her. It was a darn good write. |
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Re: DANCE MY SISTER
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by Chanti on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 02:33:30 PM AEST
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| Amazing write! You have a lot of talent... I hope your sister can be helped, and its nice that you care alot of about her. |
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Re: DANCE MY SISTER
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 09:24:38 PM AEST
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Wow, impressed with the way you wrote this piece.......it flows so well.Hope you write many more, thx for sharing
Steve |
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Re: DANCE MY SISTER
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by Archie on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 04:49:10 PM AEST
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| If a guy treated my sister like that it would be hard for me to forgive him. Great write |
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