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Demons
Contributed by
Coquillion
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Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 06:51:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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So!!! Now begins the misery.
The demons, deep inside my head, awake.
I feel their dark malignancy
and when, at last, they struggle free,
such vengeance they will take.
I have no strength with which to fight.
I feel them slowly take control.
I feel their foul and savage spite,
feel their dark and cruel delight,
as they enslave my soul.
Now, all around, confusion reigns
With every day a nightmare dream.
My will is bound by demon chains
and of what I was? – naught remains
save a single, silent, scream.
Copyright ©
Coquillion
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2003-12-21 06:51:53]
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Re: Demons
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by DreamWeaver on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 06:59:41 AM AEST
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| Excellent write ... and portrays the frustration and agony of depression well ... Jan |
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Re: Demons
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by P0rNStAr on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 07:42:31 AM AEST
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| Yerh what she said ! =P~~ great write hon |
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Re: Demons
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 08:21:20 AM AEST
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Very good work here!
you've captured this so creativly.
I can relate.
peace, joy, luv, huggs, happy holidays,
emy |
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Re: Demons
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 03:08:46 PM AEST
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CONFUSION AND DARK CRUEL DELIGHT,HMM....THIS IS EXCELLENT.
THE WIND...... |
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Re: Demons
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 06:54:31 PM AEST
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I can really relate to this and it sounds like some of my disturbed scrawls that I have posted on here. I really liked this especially the 3 middle lines in the 2nd stanza. I think it could have done without the 'So!!!!!!!!!' in the first line although the rest was awesome.
Bobo (Joel) |
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