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My book Of Moments
Contributed by
13hopes
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 08:44:54 PM in AEST
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A christmas gift, given of you.
This gift is a book, to be filled with moments true.
Moments of love and care and smiles. As i pick up my phone and dial.
I call your number from a thousand of miles a way,
Just to let you know, i am still striving to find away. Please never forget i will be back one day.
When i return, this book will be full.
With every moment and heart string you pull.
Every page filled with love written, love for you, you i am smitten.
Eery moment between us we share, when they end, i am filled with completeness and love. Your are there in my heart my little white dove........
We do not remember days, We remember moments..... :):):):):):)
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Re: My book Of Moments
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 12:45:08 AM AEST
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What a very clever and original poem 13 hopes.
I love the way you ended it, for that is certainly true.....who can remember a day....but i can tell you the way.....I felt every moment!
What a change of pace....and very enjoyable too! Thank you so much for sharing that with us!
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Re: My book Of Moments
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by emystar on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 05:49:05 AM AEST
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Wow!
This one blows me away. It's strong, tender, very deep, very impressive as it makes one think.
not days but moments
very strong, luvly message that everyone needs.
peace, joy, luv, tender,
emy
Happy holidays
I wonna thank u for all the comments on my work and the support u bring 2 our globale family. |
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