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Im Not Sorry
Contributed by
Chanti
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:01:01 PM in AEST
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First of all,
its all my fault,
im sorry that,
i cant hold back,
with this gun,
with this knife,
im sorry for wanting,
to take your life,
im sorry for always,
making you cry,
turning everything into a mess,
wanting to die,
im sorry for screaming,
and breaking every glass,
im sorry for losing my temper too fast,
not giving you a chance,
to say a ******* word,
at the top of my lungs,
the most vile things ever heard,
im sorry for hating,
everything that you do,
but one thing im not sorry for,
im not sorry that i hate you.
Copyright ©
Chanti
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by Lessa on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:42:05 PM AEST
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| thats a really awsome write, so meaningful |
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by jaeann on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 05:36:24 PM AEST
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| if they deserve the hate......within your mind.....if they deserve it....then there's no need for the sorrow........it is not our place to forgive......not our "job".....there are many that i have intense dislike for......and that would putting it mildly....i'm sorry for my actions but i'm not sorry for the hatred for you that caused it.........really great message........ |
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by ammalu on
Wednesday, 5th May 2004 @ 03:12:11 AM AEST
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| touching - at times it happens, my dear - resuming better relation later is welcoming - narrated well - keep it up. |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Monday, 8th November 2004 @ 07:13:08 PM AEST
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This is the poem that has toppled mine as the most read angry poem!? I'm upset!
BTW-nicely done. |
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by Nixzy on
Monday, 3rd January 2005 @ 08:45:34 PM AEST
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| That was amazing, i really felt the anger! Omg i just loved it!!! Fantastic write :) |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by Scarlett on
Tuesday, 11th January 2005 @ 04:40:34 AM AEST
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wow. pretty intense.
good flow, felt your emotion x x |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on
Sunday, 23rd January 2005 @ 11:32:01 AM AEST
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Great write, filled with bouts of emotion and anger!!! Wow, good write, take care of yourself...
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx |
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by Anti_social on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:33:51 PM AEST
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| That was great |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by CrippinBabi513 on
Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 04:41:34 PM AEST
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| I LOVED IT...STAY ANGRY IF THAT WAt IT TAKES TO WRITE LIKE THAT lol |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by Sonic_phoenix on
Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 08:58:18 AM AEST
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Wicked write lol love it
jen |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by PainfulSpirit06 on
Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 12:30:34 PM AEST
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| I can really sense the hatred for whoever you were referring to. You should let them read it! |
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by brookers on
Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 12:44:04 AM AEST
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| Wow...I completely love this poem. Awesome awesome job. |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by Fears on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 09:31:24 PM AEST
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| your poem is filled with so much...anger and hate it seems like i can see colors flowing from the computer screen |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by seci on
Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 06:35:44 PM AEST
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| ithis will be a good ass poem if you are going through a bad relationship. i like |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by DeathByLove on
Wednesday, 8th June 2005 @ 03:05:27 PM AEST
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| I love it it reminds me of a serial killer actually |
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by candysears on
Saturday, 22nd October 2005 @ 02:49:11 PM AEST
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This is an excellent way of getting your angry out...But poem is very good.
God Bless |
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by memories_mist on
Thursday, 3rd November 2005 @ 11:55:58 AM AEST
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| This totally describes how I feel right now towards someone. A great all around write with the perfect timing and emotion flowing through. Definitely one I need to print and frame for them days like today. |
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by Sinfullilmissmuppet on
Saturday, 5th November 2005 @ 01:02:42 AM AEST
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good work
you probably dont need another praising compliment but ur gunna get it coz im bored n im being interactive teehee :p
nah good job very angry
im glad u dont wanna kill nme
but i must admit i do like playing with guns so that line had an entirely different effect then the intended one im shure
till next time
emz |
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by tacit_pain on
Sunday, 13th November 2005 @ 08:48:42 PM AEST
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| I really love this poem, mainly because I can relate so much to it and it's the words that I want to get out, but never can. Awesome job. |
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by SmileSkinDeep on
Monday, 9th January 2006 @ 09:27:35 PM AEST
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Not that you need yet another comment....but your poem really rocks! Everybody can connect with it so we all have to say somthing.
Great work
~April |
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by Tiffyo4 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 04:08:42 PM AEST
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| nice |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by no_1nos_me on
Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 04:16:11 PM AEST
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Nice. I can relate
Keep up the good work |
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by snowflake on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:24:12 PM AEST
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such an amazing write i like how you took your emotions out in it Great Work!!!!!
*~SnoWflAkE~* |
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by candyistoo-sweet on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 03:04:22 PM AEST
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| i love this.... how you apologize for everything except for what really ticks you off, what your heart doesn't want to apologize for..... its real on so many levels |
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by princess_of_pain on
Thursday, 8th June 2006 @ 11:06:17 AM AEST
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| one word: astounding |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by bloodbeckons on
Tuesday, 13th June 2006 @ 08:20:35 PM AEST
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| That sparked deep disgusting agonising feelings in me, good show! |
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by Uncertain_Oblivion on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 05:07:46 PM AEST
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absolutely beautiful...but won't you tell us how you really feel?
I loved it. I'm giving it 5 stars. |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by brittaney on
Monday, 30th October 2006 @ 06:14:39 PM AEST
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| wow! AMAZING! |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by sarahdanielle on
Sunday, 5th November 2006 @ 09:23:46 PM AEST
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| wow...i definitely feel you there ha |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 06:01:36 AM AEST
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| That was an amazing poem! I could feel the anger in this piece of writing! |
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by Fairiepsycho on
Sunday, 11th March 2007 @ 11:14:36 PM AEST
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| I can completely relate to this. This is wonderfully written. You cna't control the things that you feel, don't try. I just try to learn to cope. |
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 9th April 2007 @ 03:15:53 PM AEST
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| WWWWOOOWWW!!!!! I can feel the absolutely feel the hatred and anger pulsating through your veins in this one. Great write!!!! |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by lost_chadow on
Friday, 5th October 2007 @ 07:53:47 AM AEST
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| I lurves it, especially the closer. |
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by Desideratum on
Monday, 12th May 2008 @ 06:00:55 PM AEST
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| How does this have so many views? It's alright, good. |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by angel_blue on
Thursday, 28th August 2008 @ 08:53:38 AM AEST
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| Bravo! it takes courage to express what you feel without worring what others may think of you. many aren't as honest. good write! |
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by Tiffyo4 on
Sunday, 30th November 2008 @ 08:21:36 PM AEST
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| wow very powerful right i feel your pain keep up the good work |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:38:50 PM AEST
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such a meaningful, passionate write.
-phil |
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by ItsMeNow on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 11:09:39 AM AEST
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| I love it! I wanna send it to so many people. Keep it up. |
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by kismetkills on
Thursday, 9th April 2009 @ 04:47:19 AM AEST
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| wow remind me to never get on your bad side... |
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by DarkFaerie on
Saturday, 29th August 2009 @ 07:29:44 AM AEST
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| Fantastic write. I understand, I lose my temper way too easily too. 5 stars |
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by Mexy on
Sunday, 28th March 2010 @ 09:55:09 PM AEST
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| Very intense. I can really feel the emotion in this. |
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by veronicablue on
Wednesday, 31st March 2010 @ 11:04:41 AM AEST
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I love it, I've been there. It's hard to "Zen out" when you have so much passion, as it's been suggested that I should do. This reminds me of a song by Bad Religion called "Infected."
"I want to take you, I want to break you,
Supplicate you, with thorny roses,
I want to bathe you in holy water I want to kill you,
Upon the alter, you and me, you and me."
Keep up the good work! |
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by nobodyJQ on
Friday, 7th May 2010 @ 06:55:16 AM AEST
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| detail i like that |
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Re: Im Not Sorry
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by shereal_14 on
Wednesday, 7th July 2010 @ 08:09:18 PM AEST
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| All I can say is wow! Very awesome and powerful write |
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