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Unexpected comments
Contributed by
wrybod
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 03:49:38 PM in AEST
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Jo's driving the long road out of town
Car full of "Christmas Celebration"
She sees a Navajo woman
walking back to the reservation
Pulls over to offer her a lift
The Navajo was greatful
but to sit her in the front seat
they had to move a crate full
The Navajo stared intently
at the dozen bottles of "liquor"
She raised her eyebrows, looked at Jo
her sad eyes seemed to flicker
"I got them for my husband"
(Jo's explanation made)
the Navajo nodding slowly
said just two words
...........................
"good trade"
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by shelby on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 04:04:11 PM AEST
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LOL tis very charming write my friend lol
Michelle |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by aernby on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 05:09:54 PM AEST
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wrybod,
a little rye humor . . .
good write
aern+ |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:56:52 PM AEST
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well put
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:11:47 PM AEST
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| LOL ... dear wrybod ... thanks for the laugh this morning ... well written ... Jan |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 11:26:39 PM AEST
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Thanks for the smile, My friend...
Jenni |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 12:12:11 AM AEST
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Dear Bob,
What a funny funny poem. I think I might know why Jo exchanged all that booze for you.
Look at the terrible job you did when you were clearning the house and rumming too!
Hopefully she will get a maid that doesn't booze as much as you!
Great poem, mate
many laughs
ConSueMate |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 03:39:53 AM AEST
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| HA HA I LIKE THIS. |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by venkat on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 04:14:08 AM AEST
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"good trade" its a humorous on 30 bottles..
woman knows other woman's intention..
welldone.. venkat |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 08:23:48 AM AEST
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at first i thought this was going to be a sad one - but you fooled me lol - you have a great sense of humor. thanks for getting my day off with a chuckle.
merry |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Thursday, 25th December 2003 @ 12:56:47 PM AEST
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| lol...only in texas. good write. |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 08:05:16 AM AEST
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| roflmao! i love your mind hehe hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Unexpected comments
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by Jacktripper on
Wednesday, 28th January 2004 @ 12:54:00 PM AEST
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| That's great.... Very good.. the rhyme scheme works to your benefit. It's like that camp ground story tale format. You have a very good sense of humor in your writtings I'd admire that. Very hard to write comedy...Great work.. |
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