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My Wings of Black
Contributed by
norticus
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 03:05:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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My talons of love will lift you high
Drops of blood falling from the sky
Flesh burns as I dig inside
Our gazes lock; master and bride
Love falls on you like a surprise attack
As I embrace you
in my wings of black
My beak of wisdom will consume you whole
Words that enslave you to your soul
Our thoughts combined as you are entranced
Entwined forever since the first dance
Will is the thing in which you lack
You can't run away
from my wings of black
My feathers of passion will keep you warm
And you are empowered over the storm
Our flesh so close that we become one
Together forever until all things are done
You can run away, but you'll always come back
Back to my love
and my wings of black
jz
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2003-12-20 15:05:10]
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Re: My Wings of Black
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by afraid_of_fear on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 03:33:59 PM AEST
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ooh.. i like this.. dark and beautiful!
charlotte x_x_x |
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Re: My Wings of Black
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:55:06 PM AEST
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a painting of gothic hue
one of the better done by you
dark and ominus is this love
certainly not from heaven above
good job 4.3
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Re: My Wings of Black
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by Merry on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 01:35:08 AM AEST
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very dark and sensuous - wow i think i'm hallucinating
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Re: My Wings of Black
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by Manicmuze on
Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 11:06:23 AM AEST
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oh yea... i love this. i little walk on the dark side... a desperate kind of love.
Strong poem, I will definately be reading more of you :)
~ Wendy |
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