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Diamond
Contributed by
TheSchroedmeister
on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 01:46:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Be it grave, be it fair,
That the diamond is there
Unseen,
That the crucible of humility,
Of living,
Can yield such wonders
The world might say,
"Here, for you"
As it presents the treasure
But far in coming,
Patience
The diamond hums,
Heard around the corner
As the gauntlet ensues
But the reward!
So walls are scaled
In its name,
Races are won
Just the same,
And as we cross the line,
I wonder
What is worse for the seeker;
That it will yet shine,
Or that it is not?
Copyright ©
TheSchroedmeister
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2003-12-20 13:46:46]
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Re: Diamond
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by aernby on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 05:26:21 PM AEST
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th poem is well crafted
but I do not understand it...
the fault is most likely mine .. but
a question for you
Does a poem make clear
or obscure???
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Re: Diamond
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by bernard on
Sunday, 2nd May 2004 @ 01:55:41 AM AEST
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I like your way of thinking this poem is exquisite thanks for an excellent read.
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Re: Diamond
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 11th June 2004 @ 03:14:55 AM AEST
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| this poem is nice I like the angle you went, very creative. good write A+++ |
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