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Forever Turned
Contributed by
Pompous
on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:01:57 AM in AEST
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as a sense of relief
fills inside of me
the bitter angriness
is released slowly
its calm now days
relaxtion is put to a test
a final sigh, a final breath
a hot and lonley day at rest
its over now
finished for good
however i'm not that happy
even though I know I should
the endless days are full
with so many things to do
however plans don't always work
plans don't always go through
its summer once again
I should be relieved now
but something's missing
i'm lost somewhere, somehow
i don't know how I feel
my world is forever turned
first its a short bliss
next its ferociously burned
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2003-12-20 07:01:57]
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Re: Forever Turned
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:14:31 AM AEST
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| it's good pompous. keep up the good work!:) |
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Re: Forever Turned
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by bobotheclown on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 06:07:43 PM AEST
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I liked this rather simple and to the point but very good nonetheless. Keep it up!
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Re: Forever Turned
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by STRaNGe_LiNDSeY on
Thursday, 22nd April 2004 @ 01:00:28 AM AEST
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Very simple yet very complex. The way I could only wish to write. Great job. You are very talented.
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