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In Your Lashes
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 03:11:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Snowflakes fall to lashes
The cycle seems to repeat
Take me away from anything
Help me find my feet
The echoes of remembrance
Meet the sorrow of your face
I can't remember your name tonight
And I'd kill to never come back to this place
The flakes that fell to lashes
And the ways I never could
I felt the same for so long
And I knew I never would
Feeling sorry for another day
As you wipe away your lashes
These snowflakes fall forever
They burn into memory and fade away to ashes...
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Re: In Your Lashes
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 03:29:28 AM AEST
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Very creative.
peace, joy, luv, snow flakes,
emy |
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Re: In Your Lashes
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:48:54 PM AEST
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| this poem is magic, love it:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: In Your Lashes
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by Jacktripper on
Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 08:29:08 AM AEST
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Hmmm.. interesting I'm trying to find the reasoning in the snowflakes falling. It's serving as a constant reminder....I think.....
It's very very good I gotta hunch it's something to do with falling in love and not wanting to have those feelings anymore. So in your lashes represents tear drops? I'm going deep excellent poetry that's what it's all about. |
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