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WHY DO U
Contributed by
emystar
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 02:32:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Your heart is broken beyond repair.
Memories still haunt U there.
So many times she's left U alone.
You'd think by now you'd of known.
It's your life she's playing with
alone where only memories exist.
Why do U torture your heart
With one little lonely cupid dart?
You r very easy to luv
still hanging on when push
comes to shove.
She's always luving on payday
leaving U again but never stays.
Sometimes you have to choose
Do u want luv or 4-ever blues?
Any women can treat U better.
She'll just keep on if U let her.
Copyright ©
emystar
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2003-12-20 02:32:46]
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Re: WHY DO U
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 08:09:05 AM AEST
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| very interesting write..venkat |
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Re: WHY DO U
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by sweetangeluk on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 08:22:29 AM AEST
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Expressed well emy
Great poem
Love
Angelxxxx |
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Re: WHY DO U
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by 13Hopes on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 04:59:47 AM AEST
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Some people are bitten by what they think of as love.... Great write my friend... :)
Cheers
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Re: WHY DO U
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 05:34:00 AM AEST
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| very nice |
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Re: WHY DO U
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 06:13:32 AM AEST
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Very sage poem, with your own unique spelling, makes a nice change.
Enjoyed it immensely
bob |
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Re: WHY DO U
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 27th December 2003 @ 04:40:29 PM AEST
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Ouch..I hear ya, grrlfriend..and I know some women like this also.... Too bad the men fall for it...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: WHY DO U
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 09:05:19 AM AEST
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Wow Emy, how enlightening. A woman
who admits that there are other women who
only use men. I thought it was a trade secret.
Great poem. It opened my eyes.
Love,
Rob |
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