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BLEEDING SOUL!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:38:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Will you surprise me someday,
And show up at my door?
Could your heart now seek me out
In reminisces of days of yore?
You left me alone in silence.
No warnings did I receive.
A hole now opened in my heart,
That in my soul does bleed.
Will you break out in a loving smile,
When you think of times we shared?
And will you ever tally up,
The ways I showed I cared?
Many days have passed me by.
In suffering silence alone I cry.
I’m sure we breathe in the same air.
For your ghost is with me, everywhere!
robertburns2@mac.com
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2003-12-20 00:38:53]
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Re: BLEEDING SOUL!
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by RhymeStein on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:53:01 AM AEST
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| Now thats a definite work of art! and i definately understand what you mean about the ghost thing. But dont worry you'll find your ghost buster who will suck up all those old memories, and fill it with better memories. |
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Re: BLEEDING SOUL!
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by emystar on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:53:26 AM AEST
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Wow now this is very sad but written very well as usual.
Hope u find the peace u seek.
peace, joy, luv, Happy holidays,
emy
Still your #1 fan |
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Re: BLEEDING SOUL!
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by harshreality on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:53:47 AM AEST
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| This is beautiful. I often wonder the same things, but could never find a way to express it. You did very well. |
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Re: BLEEDING SOUL!
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by springfield on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 01:36:04 AM AEST
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| Your heart may bleed for awhile, cause you have a big one. Thank you for sharing. |
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Re: BLEEDING SOUL!
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 04:18:35 AM AEST
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| very nice, sad and torturing, but very nice |
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