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MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:10:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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This man Swa, a complete stranger in Belgium helped me almost every day.....
My pain was so great, there were days I wished I could have died, and left it all!
But you were always there to answer
my beckoning call!
Then you even offered to take all my poems
and make me my own site.
A complete stranger I was to you Swa.....but you made everything all right.
My Heart Says Thank you.....thank you......
A red rose like my heart...
With "thank you" petals playing beautiful
music like Mozart!
My poems are my children, Swa, like precious roses blooming through my pen.
And now I've found another rose, one among men!
You were always so kind to me,
We were separated by a line
over the great sea.
And yet, I could feel your kindness
and goodness....
For one heart can feel another heart's caress.
You threw me an anchor from
computer's mangled mess,
As busy as I know you always are.....
I knew I could email you,
and ask for a fallen star,
Now you have taken the most precious
of all my things,
Painted them with beautiful colors,
music, love,
and my heart sings!
Why are you so kind?
It's not because you are blind.
But your heart too, has found, and is
bound with "sunshine."
You've solved the mystery so fine....
"Those who bring sunshine into a
friend's heart,
Cannot keep it from reflecting into theirs,
from the very start!"
To give makes us much happier than to receive,
You live that Swa, and I know you
truly believe,
That loving others is loving you...
for your love is always showing through,
with all the kind things that you do!
There are not enough petals I could pull,
from this flowered heart of mine...
Nor enough "thank you" roses to define....
Appreciation I fill in your cup,
May our friendship continue as we sup....
I feel it's such an honor to have a friend,
that I'll never want to give up!
Warm petals from my heart,
to one of the kindest men I've ever known!
Swa, you are a wonderful friend!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
Winter 2001
"It has been said,
that we all have our
own special angel to
help us when we need
it....if that is true, then
Swa was mine!"
Copyright ©
lovingcritters
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2003-12-20 00:10:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:23:43 AM AEST (User
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This is so sweet, my friend,
as I was reading it I could see your guardian angle before I read the last part.
It's really amazing how God lus us so much that he sends a tottal stranger to rescue us before we perish.
Great write!
peace, joy, luv, angels,
emy |
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by venkat on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 01:18:21 AM AEST (User
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Entire poem is very good..especially these lines so nice to read..
"A red rose like my heart...
With "thank you" petals playing beautiful
music like Mozart!"..
Very good friendly heart you have..
I appreciate you for this poem... venkat
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 01:42:03 AM AEST (User
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this is beautiful sounds like a great frined indeed
michelle |
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 10:10:50 AM AEST (User
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I had no idea you had been through such a bad time 'Mate. It doesn't drag your poetry down at all. You just shine straight through and give give give.
I count myself fortunate to have met you
bob
PS I'm trying to catch up on your list. |
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cynthia on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 07:29:17 PM AEST (User
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This is such a beautiful tribute to your special friend Cheri.
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by jaeann on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 01:57:05 AM AEST (User
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you were rescued my love.......as you rescue others........ |
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 09:45:59 PM AEST (User
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dearest connie, im sure he loved this, very sweet and heartfelt poem indeed:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: MY HEART SAYS THANK YOU....
(User Rating: 1 ) by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 07:51:53 PM AEST (User
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This was deeply awesome ConSue. It was an incredibly touching write. I enjoyed this very much and fully agree with it. |
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