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COME BACK TO ME (Haiku Series)
Contributed by
Del
on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:48:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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stormy clouds gather
since my lover went away
I feel oh, so blue
sad thoughts are with me
thru each day and all night long
Ache so to hold you
sunshine please shine thru
make the dark clouds go away
please come back to me
i will make you smile
i love you, darling, trust me
please don't break my heart
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Del
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2003-12-19 23:48:35]
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Re: COME BACK TO ME (Haiku Series)
(User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 12:15:57 AM AEST
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What can I say that would ever say enough how lovely this poem is?
Exquisite Delight!
lovingcritters
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Re: COME BACK TO ME (Haiku Series)
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by Cobalt on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 03:21:56 PM AEST
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This was a really good write Del. I enjoyed reading it.
'i will make you smile
i love you, darling, trust me
please don't break my heart'
Ecspecially these last lines. |
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