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Take the long way home
Contributed by
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 08:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm a long way away
and lost in a cave.
I'm lost in a world
where time doesn't matter
and worry has no place.
Where sadness doesn't belong
and kindness does predominate.
It's a long way home
and I don't want to
walk that way alone.
'Cause time has a way of standing very still.
If I know you, you will come walking home with me.
You're a long way from me
and lost on an island.
You're lost in a place
where disappointment cannot live
and anger cannot find.
Where love rules over all
and joy beats everything.
You're a long way from home
and you should never walk that way alone.
'Cause time - it doesn't move an inch.
If you knew me, you'd pinch
to prove it's not a dream.
No matter how long it takes,
no matter what you need to do,
you can take the long way home.
I'll be waiting for you.
Copyright ©
Hannah_jeannie_Brazeau
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2003-12-19 20:10:02]
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Re: Take the long way home
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by Candi on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 08:41:31 PM AEST
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| this is a beautiful write. i really like it. thank you for sharing it with me. |
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Re: Take the long way home
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by EmSal on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 10:03:25 PM AEST
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Mentally and emotionally far apart I agree...with that...a very nice write especially the end - you'll be waiting. Very nice. All the best.
Emma. |
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Re: Take the long way home
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:51:52 PM AEST
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Good work!
Hang tuff.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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