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Why
Contributed by
loopylou
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Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:25:55 PM in AEST
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my world is a place where people can talk to people they dont know.
a place were there is no fear,only joy. Birds sing and children laugh,people will join hands with 1 another and talk.There would be no inequalities or bullying.There would be no murders or harrassment.The world would be a better place 4 everybody.But this is not my world.Why? Why? Why?
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Re: Why
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by EmSal on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 10:38:42 PM AEST
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Your world is how you want the world to be. Exactly why...too many questions to do with why. Good write.
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Re: Why
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 10:56:27 PM AEST
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Great Poem Loopylu,
Wouldn't it be wronderful if such a world existed? Hang onto that Hope Loopylu...perhaps your dream will come true!
Beautiful thought provoking poem.
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