|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Broken and sad heart
Contributed by
dena
on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 02:58:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
|
i will never forget the days we had
the days that never went bad
my mind used to tell me we would be together forever,
but now that i look @ it i realize that now its all severed
the feeling i have for u will never go
the feeling of loving you so
the day you were in my heart,
everyday and so on from the start
i wonder if you still think of me,
or never even think of our wonderful memories
my heart is broken
please mend my pain
seeing u in anothers arms.... i just cant contain.
you probably never thought it would do me any harm.
remembering all the memories we once shared
now you not talking makes me seem i'm impared
please pt back the many peces of my roken heart
Copyright ©
dena
... [
2003-12-19 14:58:05]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Broken and sad heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 07:01:57 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
So sad, hang in there...
Kie |
|
|
Re: Broken and sad heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by EmSal on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 10:51:19 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Tender feelings in a beautifully sad write. All the best.
Emma. |
|
|
Re: Broken and sad heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 02:24:09 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Beautiful write. I hope things get better. Sometimes we do the most foolish things and end up hurting ourselves. |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
