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FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
Contributed by
jaeann
on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 02:10:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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They pour from my soul
like memories in a kaleidoscope
tube of geometric
colors....... oily.....glass-like
infinite designs of
stained church
windows.....
windows to the soul
they say are one's
eyes........
windows to the
spirit's quest for
peace from the
pain ......
a backdrop of
remembrances........
a nuance of a
memory flows
to the paper
as the tears
path the
way........
Copyright ©
jaeann
... [
2003-12-19 02:10:41]
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 02:23:02 AM AEST
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Very good one here!
Tottally awesome!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by venkat on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 02:59:26 AM AEST
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| good effect..venkat |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 03:56:25 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write ... I love how you set this out and how you expressed yourself ... nicely done ... Jan |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 04:59:37 AM AEST
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Marvelous way of expressing the feelings you have as you experience painful thoughts Jaymee.....the hot black lava from a hurricane.
Wonderfully expressive way of explaining it!
Love you,
ConSue |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by bhavnas on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 05:21:52 AM AEST
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| Hi jaenne, this is a beautiful write direct from the soul.....bhavna |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by Cynthia on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 05:56:20 PM AEST
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WOW!
I have to read this again.....
WOW!
This is a beautiful write jaeann.
So much emotion to it.
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by Rakerman1999 on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 07:05:47 PM AEST
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Yes! Thats just how it is!!
Very well done my friend.
Larry |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by Rain on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:40:12 PM AEST
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.. like memories in a kaleidoscope.. i like the way you think. i love this excelent ...
sara |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:15:56 PM AEST
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| OOHHHH how could i miss you? Your flow is soooooo smooth! |
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Re: FLOWING FROM THE DARKNESS
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by HiddenAlmaresare on
Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 11:21:14 PM AEST
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I love the imagery in your poem, and I can truly feel that. wow.
~Almaresare
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