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Rumination
Contributed by
i_wish_i_was_rose
on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:05:55 PM in AEST
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You’re proud of your actions
but all I see is my father
and Im not willing to wait for your rebirth
like my mother for his
Maybe it’s the tv and video games that made me impatient
or maybe it’s the lack of any vision of future on your part
because I see much in my own future
The only problem is your absent from it
Im planning what to do after you
more than with you
but Im not escaping anytime soon
because despite your faults
You can make me feel like a mountain.
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2003-12-18 23:05:55]
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Re: Rumination
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:51:22 PM AEST
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Omg I can SO relate to this!! You have no idea. It's eerie. Every word and every line... wow. It's like you've been in my head for the last... year or so! lol... all that aside, great write!
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Re: Rumination
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:18:00 AM AEST
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Now that's true luv that u can look past the faults. This planet needs more like this write.
Hang tuff and keep up the great work!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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