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When Friendship Dies
Contributed by
blueheart
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Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:01:18 PM in AEST
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There comes a time when friendship is lost,
Old alliances fade and loyalty is torched,
And in these times all words are weightless,
Instead of friends you've found your haters.
I turned around too late to know,
You stabbed my back, stooped so low,
To turn things around, I tried to do,
But everything else was up to you.
Too bad I've been forgotten,
It's a shame I've been pushed out of place,
These people whom I grew up with,
Refuse to remember my face.
So as I leave on this traceless track,
I've felt the last of your attack,
For in my past you will remain,
But in my future you will never see me again.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2003-12-18 22:01:18]
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:22:58 PM AEST
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| NICE WRITE... I went through this recently too but I think I chose a less tactful approach when I put it to poetry... this is good!! |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by emystar on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:35:43 AM AEST
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Excellent wrting!
It's sad but sometimes it happens. I've had these feelings from time to time.
Keep up the great writing!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by EmSal on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:30:47 PM AEST
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Oh wow! I went throught this! Hypocrites alright! Makes me so angry. Your write is so true for me! Every word! Hopefully even the last two lines, as I was so upset and then so furious and then numb and now I just hate...not a good way to go, but hey it's life right and they aren't worthy of being called friends. Excellent write. I hope all the best for you because I know how hard ths is to go through, don't give in. Let me know how things go.
Emma. |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by Ronald on
Monday, 22nd December 2003 @ 11:14:57 AM AEST
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| It's just so sad to know that sometimes our very true friends are great hypocrites... Well, good write over here :-) |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by a_t0rtured_s0ul on
Wednesday, 24th December 2003 @ 02:52:03 AM AEST
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| loved it. we all have these friends. |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 31st December 2003 @ 11:04:42 PM AEST
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yes yes yes.....Written to perfection my friend.
Well done
Larry |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by chandramohan on
Thursday, 1st January 2004 @ 03:32:04 AM AEST
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well said.
wish u all happiness in the new year.
chandramohan... |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 7th January 2004 @ 10:29:07 AM AEST
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| Ah, another fellow countryman (or countrywoman)...what a well-written poem...I have had these kind of friends too and written about them but it never came out as well as your poem here. Good work! |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 18th January 2004 @ 06:07:48 AM AEST
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| excellent, written beautifully!! i hope you feel better now, its always sad but good on you! their loss not yours! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: When Friendship Dies
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by mercedes on
Saturday, 7th February 2004 @ 11:10:03 AM AEST
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| You are right blueheart, it sums it up pretty well. I should of read this sooner, thanks for pointing it out to me. |
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