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Darkness
Contributed by
SkYYBLu
on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:03:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Perpetual darkness everywhere
Forsaken among the lost
Light shines dimly through oppressed hearts
Daunted by light
Seeking fulfillment in being blind
Perpetually cold
Bitter hearts are considered sweet
Tears from lamentation create a crimson sea
Glimmering seductively to those who have sight
Malice is cherished
'Tis given aboundingly
Lucifer offers me his confort
All chance of valour is gone
I abide in his temptation
All hope, for hope, is lost
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SkYYBLu
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2003-12-18 18:03:06]
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Re: Darkness
(User Rating: 1 )
by Aika on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:30:08 PM AEST
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Better follow the light, offers you more..
hard the come back from dark
from all dark shadows..
Lovely but sad.. aika:-) |
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Re: Darkness
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by SensitiveSoAbused on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:00:33 PM AEST
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i didnt like it. i couldnt see anything.
no visuals, novel concepts, but no visuals |
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Re: Darkness
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by afraid_of_fear on
Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 09:57:50 AM AEST
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Beautiful poem..
x_x_x |
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