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The Moon and the Sun

Contributed by Suz on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 05:46:23 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Go cast your eyes into the flame
And let your feelings go
Dig deep into the fire
For facts that will not show
Burn your hands
And singe your eyes
Watch the blisters grow
And seize the moon and the sun

Go slit your wrist and watch it bleed
Your blood falls; bursts aflame
Look at your reflection
Try to ignore the pain
It tingles 'cross
your forehead
And dances in your brain
And you feel the moon and the sun

Go shed a tear into my hand
Bow close now as it sings
Here its sharpened chorus
As evil comes and wins
Take it on
your finger
And breath in time's past sins
And hate the moon and the sun

Go ponder over memories
That haunt and comfort you
Debate o'er what you see
And if or not it's true
Plead for death
'cause life is cold
When you hate what you knew
And kill the moon and the sun

Copyright © Suz ... [ 2003-12-18 17:46:23]
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Re: The Moon and the Sun (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:38:05 PM AEST
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Omg I absolutely love this... the best thing I've read in a while. It really hit me. I'll be bookmarking this for sure!! Thank you for sharing this... I can't tell you how much it gets me. Brilliant!!!

~ Moonlit

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