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Truely
Contributed by
mindancer
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Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 05:27:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Theres this guy who wants to be in my life.
Wants to show me what true loves like.
He never wants me to be lonely,
He's been waiting for the chance to show me.
Things can be so much better.
When him and i are together.
He thinks he can show me that loves not cursed.
If i would just open my eyes and heart first.
Tells me theres nothing to fear.
Says he'll always be here.
Says that the past is the past.
And what him and i have here will be the one to last.
Feelings of hope start to set in.
Seems his love comes truely from within.
No games has he played.
Only true feelings he has portrayed.
Can't help being scared,nothing more have i ever feared.
Then falling in love with someone who truely cared.
Copyright ©
mindancer
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2003-12-18 17:27:50]
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Re: Truely
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by jme on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 05:32:33 PM AEST
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Re: Truely
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 11:32:26 PM AEST
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I can relate to this... very much. Especially the last 2 lines. Great write... real emotion.
~ Moonlit |
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