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A PLea So Dark
Contributed by
P0rNStAr
on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:06:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Withered black void of desructive hatred
Boiled blood plexed in brain caved slaught restruction
As of though the wind does blow and burn the threads of time
sewing what is real
As a tortured list of blood-dried wrists is put in a blue bed
They look at me with contempt and pity with deep bloodshot eyes
Nothing more for intelligent fools with their self-righteous world and
skies
As of now i look again at a day of guilt
and pain
A murmured growl, my pill, my friend,
Can't make it go away
A sand of time is my body in the wind
Today i've died again
I scream. I scream. I scream!
Never again.
Copyright ©
P0rNStAr
... [
2003-12-18 06:06:35]
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Re: A PLea So Dark
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by fallensilence on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 12:33:04 AM AEST
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| amazing. i loved the imagery that you used in this. -david |
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Re: A PLea So Dark
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by jaeann on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 01:13:43 AM AEST
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| a sand of time is my body in the wind......yes!!!! |
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Re: A PLea So Dark
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 21st December 2003 @ 02:54:52 PM AEST
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AH YES....THE WAY THIS FLOWS FROM THE SHADOWS IS UNIQUE.....INTERESTING. WELL DONE.
THE WIND....... |
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