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You Make My Day, Everyday
Contributed by
christopherfriedrich
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Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:10:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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"You Make My Day, Everyday"
A thousand miles keep us apart
And each state in between acts like a building
A building with the function of the Berlin Wall
And if only I were superman, I'd leap across every single one
Until we were within arms reach
And I would stay there forever
I'd forget about returning home
Because with you, I wouldn't need anything else
I'd have it all in my arms each night
And when you'd call me "coach", I'd feel like I was the luckiest guy in the world
It would make my day everytime I heard your voice
And even if these feelings aren't mutual, I'm lucky enough to call you "friend"
You're one of a kind; it's just who you are
The way you can tell a story and make everyone happy
And the way you can make someone smile just by opening your mouth
And this is my oath; I will see you in time.
Copyright ©
christopherfriedrich
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2003-12-18 03:10:51]
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Re: You Make My Day, Everyday
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by keilajo on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:12:47 AM AEST
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awwww, Thank you for sharing this, reminds me of the one I love.~
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Re: You Make My Day, Everyday
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by JPMcMillan on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:23:20 AM AEST
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Rock solid work, amazingly clear, great stuff!
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Re: You Make My Day, Everyday
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 06:50:30 AM AEST
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Very strong, positive write!
Sso swwweeeeet!
peace, joy, luv, determination,
emy |
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Re: You Make My Day, Everyday
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 10:03:14 AM AEST
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| awww, reminds me of someone too.. great write!! |
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