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ODE TO MY LOVE!
Contributed by
robert_edgar_burns
on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:54:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I was a man unfeeling,
With cold and bitter heart.
A soul so lost and bleeding.
A shattered piece of art.
Then through a magic door you stepped,
And walked into my world.
A vision like bright angels.
The world’s most beautiful girl.
I thank you for the times we laughed,
And the times we hugged and kissed.
For being the best friend of my life.
You shall be sorely missed.
Please forgive me for the times
I brought tears to your eyes.
Now all alone without your love,
It is my turn to cry!
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robert_edgar_burns
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2003-12-18 01:54:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: ODE TO MY LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:59:09 AM AEST (User
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Lovely write. Hope it isn't too late....
Good to see you posting again, Rob..
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Re: ODE TO MY LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:59:12 AM AEST (User
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Very sad but written well!
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: ODE TO MY LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by keilajo on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 03:00:55 AM AEST (User
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Very well written!
Hope to read many more...
keilajo |
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Re: ODE TO MY LOVE!
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 10:19:50 AM AEST (User
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dearest robert, so good to see you back, i hope everything is alright, lovely but sad poem, merry christmas, hugs n' love nessa |
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