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Garden of Solace
Contributed by
Vitreous_Soul
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Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:21:30 AM in AEST
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I feel so alone
I am so afraid
I feel so alone
Walking through, walking on through
The garden of solace
My one way trip, my non-stop hell
Where time does not pass
I see the pyre of thousands dead
The hills they are stained blood red
The sky is covered in thick black smoke
The world engulfed in a death cloak
As I walk on there's horrors I see
Still there's no one else but me
All plants dead and withered at my feet
I'm choking in unbearable heat
Walking through, walking on through
The garden of solace
Fountains of blood, water of disease
Where time does not pass
As I walk on and around I glance
My fright now turns to acceptance
I have no responsibility
No worries, i'm just carefree
I'm just carefree
No calls to heed, no men to lead
Alone I feed now on my greed
I have no needs, no one can plead
In my world I now implant my seed
A tzar, a king and many things
About me in hymns they will sing
I'm fall, i'm spring, i'm everything
I'm everything
Walking through, walking on through
The garden of solace
My canvas for art, my pantheon
Where time does not pass
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Re: Garden of Solace
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:47:32 AM AEST
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Very good work!
Peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Garden of Solace
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by Jeff9Man on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 02:19:36 AM AEST
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| Very good writing! it gives a very graphic visual. you can feel the emotion in this poem. thank you. |
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Re: Garden of Solace
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 04:07:32 AM AEST
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| you made me fffeel like i was in hell ....then conquered it!!!! |
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Re: Garden of Solace
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 07:59:44 AM AEST
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Such an emotional poem
Made me feel as if I was walking along side with you
Such visual scenes
Very well written
Loved it
Love
Angelxxxx
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Re: Garden of Solace
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 10:44:10 PM AEST
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How carefree for you VS. I felt that way too...until I began to see what was all around me, and then decided that pretty soon, I'd end up the same way! I loved the way you mixed drama, saddness, and joy all in one moment. 'twas true life...for that happens to us all the time.
Really like this one VS...better send it along too!
*smiles*
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Re: Garden of Solace
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 14th June 2004 @ 08:18:55 AM AEST
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You write so many good/great poems of a similar nature. This one is good- but different in style somehow. I can't quite place it, but this line is intriguing . . .
"I'm fall, i'm spring, i'm everything
I'm everything"
The end is deep aswell. Yet another highly enjoyable read. |
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