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give me peace
Contributed by
mista7
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Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 08:43:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
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give me peace for i can't sleep
give my rest for my eyes can't see
let me walk through the streets
without pain on my feet
ghetto leaving soldier
till they bury me
never taken a life so i might die
save a lost child in the time of our life
lost in the belly of the beast
been shedding tears for weeks
despised by my own kind
blind man doing time
trapped in shackles n chains
im going insane
will i breathe again?
only darkness in my heart
the hole so deep
you can even bury me.
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mista7
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2003-12-17 20:43:27]
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Re: give me peace
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:31:37 PM AEST
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Very deep and moving
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Re: give me peace
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by dena on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 02:46:37 PM AEST
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this poem is great. i love how you write! every end word rhyming!!!! yay yay yay! i feel just like that @ times, but i could never put it into words!
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