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A TEAR OF LOVE
Contributed by
lovingcritters
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Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:06:46 PM in AEST
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A tear of Love,
I dropped for you,
You are so loved.
Cherished, and renewed.
A tear of Love,
I dropped for you,
I hold you close,
Gentle, loving, true....
A tear of love,
I dropped for you
Into an ocean's vast.
My love, unending last!
My tear of love
You may pursue....
The day you find,
'Twil be the day.....
I, stop loving you!
Created by
Cheri Cam LeBren
December 2003
Be kind...only
my second attempt.
Please comment with
a tear of love!
*smiles*
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lovingcritters
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2003-12-17 18:06:46]
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Re: A TEAR OF LOVE
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:52:22 PM AEST
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yes yes yes yes yes!!!!!!!
you expressed it so well......... |
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Re: A TEAR OF LOVE
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 07:51:02 PM AEST
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very lovely i can imagine it to music my friend
Shari |
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Re: A TEAR OF LOVE
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:38:04 PM AEST
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-A tear of love,
I dropped for you
Into an ocean's vast.-
I just loved it! You are so expressive, articulate and you make the reader think in a state where you are. Now I wonder if all the tears could be counted would an ocean be large enough to hold them? Really nice poem...
Kie
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Re: A TEAR OF LOVE
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 01:38:11 AM AEST
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Beautiful lyrics, Connie....good going!!
Jenni |
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Re: A TEAR OF LOVE
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by sweetangeluk on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 08:32:26 AM AEST
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Amazing poem
So well written
I did love this one
Romantic and so full of emotion
Love Angelxxxxx |
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Re: A TEAR OF LOVE
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by RICHARD_CAMPBELL on
Thursday, 18th December 2003 @ 12:12:54 PM AEST
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Hi Lovingcritters,
its bin a while sense i last read one of your master peace.
this is another,touching and moving one, you express your self
very well good write. |
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Re: A TEAR OF LOVE
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by Wrybod on
Saturday, 20th December 2003 @ 10:33:44 AM AEST
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Lovely thought "A tear of love"
Perfect............Oh I remember the promises I made.................and kept.
bob |
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