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Rest In Pieces
Contributed by
thatabbygirl
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 05:51:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Your flawless face
Your lovely clothes—
You, my porcelain doll,
You are a thing of beauty—
You will be my friend.
My other friends left me behind
But you will stay here with me.
A thing of such beauty could never hurt me.
But, as I slowly exposed my soul to you,
I misread your loving smile
As mocking,
And I threw you down in disgust.
Now you look up at me in pieces,
Your smile gone.
It seems I have wrongly broken you—
Like all the others—
And I weep, bitterly blue,
For you have left me too.
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thatabbygirl
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2003-12-17 17:51:49]
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Re: Rest In Pieces
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:02:34 PM AEST
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| ohhh that was sad..good write though..if ya need someone to talk to I am here for ya.. |
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Re: Rest In Pieces
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by Chanti on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:20:19 PM AEST
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| I love this! Reminds me a lot of myself.. |
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Re: Rest In Pieces
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 06:45:39 PM AEST
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| ahhhh yes i know of this......brush her off my friend.....she was not worthy..... |
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Re: Rest In Pieces
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 09:46:16 PM AEST
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So very sad and soulful. Gripped my heart strings and tugged really hard...
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