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With or Without
Contributed by
RhymeStein
on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:17:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Leaves fall without a season,
Loving you without a reason.
No one really understands why,
A person would even try.
Hands on her hips,
A taste of her lips.
Heart beat gets strong,
Through each beat of the song.
A time without this,
A time needed to start this bliss.
Don't try to doubt,
Everything you are about.
Loving without a melody,
Loneliness without a remody.
Touching without a fealing,
Breaking without a healing.
The time they'd first dated,
A time that God has created.
Just pray the words said,
Is from the heart, not the head.
A theatre without a booth,
A promise without a truth.
A question without an answer,
A dance without it's dancer.
Don't let that special one just be done,
If so, before you know it that person is gone.
Now your by yourself,
Just like you left that person on the shelf.
Bride without a groom,
Memories without a room.
Both hands without golden bands,
Imprints of past times on there hands.
Looking into the heavens with a shout,
Not knowing i am with or without.
If her word said,
was from the heart not the head.
But wishing to find yourself with,
What so many call a myth.
Beautiful in its own way,
Through everything always willing to stay.
Loving with a melody,
Loneliness wiith a remody.
A bride with a groom,
Memories with a room.
Touching with a fealing,
Breaking with a healing.
Both hands with golden bands,
Imprints of present times on there hands.
Leaves fall to this season.
Loving you without a reason.
No one understands why including I,
Why you even said Good bye.
Loneliness will always have a remody,
As long as love has a melody.
Copyright ©
RhymeStein
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2003-12-17 16:17:13]
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Re: With or Without
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by MissLee on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:21:09 PM AEST
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| Very touching, GREAT WRITE, keep it up... |
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Re: With or Without
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by jaeann on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 04:50:21 PM AEST
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| beautiful write........very true commentary..... |
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Re: With or Without
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 08:48:49 PM AEST
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wow this was beautiful very moving.
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Re: With or Without
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 17th December 2003 @ 10:29:52 PM AEST
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I also found this deeply moving. My mind is screaming yes, yes, yes!!! I hear what you are saying, I just loved this one.....Good stuff!
Kie |
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Re: With or Without
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by EmSal on
Friday, 19th December 2003 @ 11:40:48 PM AEST
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Just thought I'd say that I thought this was very moving. Was an excellent write.
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